Hello, Meg. Looking up at the sky and feeling the wind may seem ordinary, but they might actually be special things. Thank you for another wonderful poem today. 😇
This is genuinely good. Not just substack good. Good. The turn in six is where it gets interesting. Everything before was the open sky. Then it gets heavy.
Hello, Meg. Looking up at the sky and feeling the wind may seem ordinary, but they might actually be special things. Thank you for another wonderful poem today. 😇
Thank you! I always look forward to your feedback.
This is beautiful, indeed it ‘falls the same on all’ 👌🏼❤️❤️
So nice to see a bit of metered rhyming verse that's not about processing pain.
This is genuinely good. Not just substack good. Good. The turn in six is where it gets interesting. Everything before was the open sky. Then it gets heavy.
Beautiful ✨🖤
Thank you!