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Petra's avatar

Wow! What a timeless warning so beautifully rendered. <3

Meg Floss's avatar

Thank you!

Dua's avatar

A masterpiece, truly !!!✨💕

Meg Floss's avatar

Thank you!

Keiichiro Iwamoto's avatar

Hi Meg, your poems always give me something important to reflect on. They make me want to be a little more generous with my kindness and a little quicker to forgive others. 😇

Darryl Wade Anderson's avatar

I loved this. Thank you for sharing. Wonderful imagery and passion.

Bryon Slack's avatar

I look down in dismay

the words had fallen in disarray,

with shaking hands,

I click Post anyway,

a reader has love they had to say,

self-doubt will be back tomorrow,

but now it's gone for today.

Decided lack of fecal material here, my dear.

Stephanie M. Vargo's avatar

So powerful. Well done.

Meg Floss's avatar

Thanks for taking the time to read and share your feedback. I appreciate you.